Your text and page styling is really effective for your storytelling so far, but you can still do more to flesh out the theme for the player! I can see there are quite a few errors occurring, so make sure to test your game often to check your game for those errors often. Good work!
I see you are testing styling your text! I'm noticing a lot of errors, most of them dealing with unclosed hooks or typos (meaning, you are missing the end of a square bracket[] or you are writing "Italic", rather than "italic"). There's much to be done at this stage, but the premise is very interesting. Are we getting a game that deals with illness and discrimination as a central theme? I look forward to learning more about it :)
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Your text and page styling is really effective for your storytelling so far, but you can still do more to flesh out the theme for the player! I can see there are quite a few errors occurring, so make sure to test your game often to check your game for those errors often. Good work!
I see you are testing styling your text! I'm noticing a lot of errors, most of them dealing with unclosed hooks or typos (meaning, you are missing the end of a square bracket[] or you are writing "Italic", rather than "italic"). There's much to be done at this stage, but the premise is very interesting. Are we getting a game that deals with illness and discrimination as a central theme? I look forward to learning more about it :)